19. september 2004 - 20:51Der er
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hjælp til engelsk stil (rettelser og felj)
Hey. Har lavet en stil på engelsk, som i kan se at jeg ikke er ret god til, så jeg håber at der er nogle KLOGE hoveder der kan hjælpe med at rette den. så jeg også kan se hvilke fejl jeg laver og tænke over dem for efter tiden!
Can Violence Be Justified
Can violence be justified? We can se violence over the whole world. Day after day people use violence. We have police in every town, but are that enough? We have many different forms of violence (terrorism, war and some other kinds of violence). I will now tell something about terrorism. We can all remember September 11th 2001. Two airplanes crashed into WTC (World Trade Centre) but what can we do to make it different, we have security over all. Who knows what this “buttheads” would do next time. In the newspapers and in TV, we hear it is Denmark turn next time. What could we Danish peoples do to make ourselves safe? We can do NOTHING, because we don’t know when they make a “crash” in Denmark. So we can go round and hope at they don’t attack Denmark.
A other form of violence we have seen in America some times, where young boys and girls kill there classmates, because they are stressed, have problems at home or they could be sick in there heads. I don’t know why they could do these crazy things. They spoil all for them and us self. But I hope the presidents in all countries always will think about this problem.
I hope we can get over this problem, but we can never get all violence out of the world. People should think them about before they do some of these crazy things again. The people from Europe and Africa have a big problem. Because that is from these continents the terrorists came from. So I don’t hope that they will do a kind of these things again, they could scream a whole world away.
Can violence be justified? We can se violence over the whole world. Day after day people use violence. We have police in every town, but is that enough? We have many different forms of violence (terrorism, war and other kinds of violence). I will now tell something about terrorism. We all remember September 11th 2001. Two airplanes were deliberately crashed into WTC (World Trade Centre) but what can be done to make a different, we have security over all. Who knows what these “buttheads” will do next time. In the newspapers and in TV, we hear that it is Denmark’s turn next time. What could the Danish peoples do to make ourselves safe? We can do NOTHING, because we don’t know when they make it happen in Denmark. All we can do is to go around and hope at they don’t attack us.
A other form of violence we have seen in America in resent time, is where young boys and girls kill there classmates, because they are stressed out, have problems at home or they could just be sick in there heads. I don’t know why they do these crazy things. They spoil everything for them and the rest of us self. But I hope the leaders of all countries always will think about this problem.
I hope we can get over these problems, but we can never get all violence out of the world. People should stop to think before they do some of these crazy things again.
Det næste er lidt noget vrøvl og jeg er ikke helt sikker på hvad det er du vil sige The people from Europe and Africa have a big problem. Because that is from these continents the terrorists came from. So I don’t hope that they will do a kind of these things again, they could scream a whole world away.
Can violence be justified? We can see violence all over the world. Day after day people use violence. We have police in every town, but is that enough? We have many different forms of violence (terrorism, war and some other kinds of violence). We all remember September 11th 2001. Two airplanes crashed into WTC (World Trade Centre) but what can we do to make it different? We have security all over. Who knows what these “buttheads” will do next time. In the newspapers and on TV, we hear it is Denmark’s turn next time. What can the Danish people do to make themselves safe? We can do NOTHING, because we don’t know when they are going to “crash” into Denmark. So we can go around and hope that they don’t attack Denmark.
Another form of violence we have seen in America some times, is where young boys and girls kill their classmates, because they are stressed, have problems at home or are just insane. I don’t know how they could do such crazy things. They spoil all for themselves and us. But I hope the presidents in all countries will always think about this problem.
I hope we can get over this problem, but we can never get rid of all violence in the world. People should think twice before they do any of these crazy things again. The people from Europe and Africa have a big problem, since terrorists often come from countries in this part of the world. So I don’t hope that they will do any kind of these things again, they could scream a whole world away.
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