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På besøg i det gamle land
Her følger fjerde brev fra vor udsendte medarbejder i Skotland. Han deltager i en tur, der er arrangeret af Det nationale skotske turistbureau for skotsk-amerikanere.
I dag kører vi gennem det skotske højland, som er noget helt speciellt!
Turistføreren, der ved en masse om vort gamle lands historie, fortæller os om alle de begivenheder, der fandt sted her i gamle dage. Vi lytter alle interesseret, især de af os, hvis forfædre er dem, der så tappert kæmpede imod englænderne for flere hundrede år siden. Hvad der specielt appellerer til os, er beretningen om slaget ved Culloden, hvor Bonnie Prince Charlie led nederlag i 1746, hvilket medførte, at skotterne ikke længere måtte bære våben og gå med kilt. En ung pige, hhvis navn var Flora McDonald, hjalp prins Charles med at flygte forklædt som pige. Flora, som englænderne arresterede og satte i Tower giftede sig efter sin frigivelse med en skotte, med hvem hun senere rejste til Amerika.
Amerika var mulighedernes land for de mange mennesker, der ønskede at forlade deres hjemland af politiske, økonomiske og religiøse grunde.
"Mange af jeres tipoldeforældre, der rejste til Amerika for at søge friheden, dannede midlertid religiøse samfund, der satte snævre grænser for individets udfoldelse, hvilket kan forekomme paradoksalt!", siger turistføreren ironisk. Men vi kan fortælle ham, at sådan er det ikke mere hjemme i staterne.

Oversat tekst:

On a visit in the old country
Here follows the fourth letter from our co-worker stationed in Scotland. He PARTICIPATES in a trip that is arranged by The national Scottish tourist bureau for Scottish-Americans.
Today we drive through the Scottish highlands, which is something completely special!
The tourist guide, who knows a lot about our old country's history, tells us about all the events, which took place here back in the days. We all listen interestingly, specially the ones of us, whose forefathers are those who so bravely fought against the Englishmen several hundred years ago. What specially appeals to us is the narrative of the battle by Culloden, where Bonnie Prince Charles were defeated, which caused that the Scottish were no longer allowed to bear arms or to wear kilts. A young girl whose name was Flora MacDonald helped Prince Charles to escape disguised as a girl. Flora, who the Englishmen arrested and placed in Tower, married after her release a Scottish man, with whom she later travelled to America.
America was the land of opportunities for the many people who wished to leave their homeland of political, FINANCIAL and religious reasons.
"Many of your great-great-grandparents, who travelled to America to pursue freedom, however formed religious societies, which placed narrow limitations on the individual's udfoldelse (jeg har ikke kunne finde en oversættelse af ordet), which may be found paradoxically!" says the tourist guide ironically. But we can tell him that it is not like that anymore back home in the states