Hjælp til rettelse af lille Engelsk stykke

Hej..

Jeg skal skrive et "abstract" om min opgave på engelsk... jeg ville høre, om der var noget der lød dumt, eller om der var grammatiske fejl...

Hvis der var en venlig sjæl der gad sætte kommaer i stykker, ville jeg være sååå lykkelig :D

Her er stykket:

This paper examines how evil is represented in literature. Evil has always fascinated us but the way it is expressed in the literature has changed through time. In 1991 the novel American Psycho by Bret Easton Ellis was published, and it became one of the most controversial and disputed books during ‘90s. The reviewers disagreed among themselves. Some thought it was a clever and beautifully controlled piece of writing, while others found the brutality of the book repulsive and unnecessary.

By an analysis and interpretation of American Psycho this paper investigates how evil is represented in the text. For comparison the paper also includes an analysis and interpretation of a short story by Danish novelist Mads Brenøe. To put the two texts into perspective the paper includes a brief section explaining the development of how evil is expressed throughout the history of literature. It is concluded that society in many ways is the cause of evil in postmodern literature.