10. november 2003 - 20:36Der er
7 kommentarer og 1 løsning
ret engelsk grammer og fejl
hej eksperter kan i ikke rette denne engelske text fri for grammer og fejl?:.. :D
180 point for det !
America history X is about Derek and Danny how has a father how work as fireman, he being killed in a fire from a black pusher, and so its began.
A night Danny wakeup he hears some sounds outside the house, he run into Derek’s room to tall him, tree Blackman try to steel his car. Derek pickup a gun and ran down under to the front door. He shoot 3 men, then he cam into prison for 2 year. Derek is a very popular man, for the whit powers, it is a kind of an army “Nazis” how hates all black people. To be so popular is one mans work Cameron the real boss. It is this guy how got Derek to do all thing. When Derek cam out from the prison every thing change he didn’t want to be in the Nazis army anymore, he’s mother is also very ill and even don’t make some thing.
Cameron’s big party Derek came into fight to Cameon, about 5 min was past when people found out what’s going on. People were being very upset to kill Derek now but he ran away. And then later Derek explain Danny how, who, and because, and what have change him in the prison. He tall him what’s going on in the prison, and how he look at the black people now. And soon Danny also Change from a bad side to a good side.
Det er svært når man ikke ved hvad det er du vil skrive.
f.eks i lilie 2, how has a father. kan betyde hvordan har en far eller how (navnet på en person) har en far. mener du som har en far (har vi ikke alle det) eller hvis far.
Det er dårligt engelsk men svært at regne ud hvad det er du vil skrive. Noget af det virker som om det er skrevet på baggrund af dårligt dansk og det gør det jo ikke lettere
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