rettelse af engelsk brev

Og hvad skal vi med deT ?

skal det rettes?

Se om du kan bruge dette, der er skrevet om hist og her, der er ingen garanti for at det er korrekt:

Many thanks for your letter, which shows your interest for Nestlé products.

We can understand that you are very concerned with our new food products, which will be introduced on the British market next year.

You are in particular concerned on behalf of children and young people. We can assure you that all our products are tested thoroughly, before they are introduced to the market. Only products that are tested and approved will be introduced to the market. Testing and approval is to make sure that the products can not harm children and young people.

Naturally we think that we by marketing these new cosmetic foods are helping the consumers with their problems. At the same time they are buying a valuable food, which give them the right nutrition for their age group. We are under the impression that the combined foods will take part in increasing the consumer’s well being, and that they will be important elements in a correct diet for busy people.

We hope that we by this letter have eased your concerns for our future products.

Jeg har stadigvæk ikke forstået hvad du vil have.

jeg vil bare gerne have det set efter for fejl

Hvilket niveau er det på?

Faktisk ville det være korrekt at starte brevet:

.....
Att.: Dr. Wendy Doyle


Dear Sir.

Thank you for your letter, in which you show your interest for Nestlé products.

......

Interest kan eventuelt udskiftes med concern

Kan det virkelig være vigtigt når brevet er fra 2003.?

ja det er jo en gammel eksamen opgave

Nestlé UK
St. George’s House
Park Lane
Croydon
London CR9 1NR

10 march 2003
British Dietetic Association
45 Regent Street
London WC1 2RT

Att.: Dr. Wendy Doyle

Thank you very much for your letter, which shows your interest in Nestlé products.

We understand that you are very concerned for the new foods, which will be introduced on the British market next year.

Your concern is particular on the behalf of children and young people. We can assure you that all of our products are tested thoroughly, before they are available on the market. There will not come items on the market, which in any way can harm children and young people.

By marketing these new cosmetic foods, we naturally think that we are helping the consumers with their problems. And at the same time they will be buying a valuable food, which gives them the right nutrition for their age group. We are under the impression that the combined foods will take a part in increasing the consumer’s well being, and that they will be important elements in a nutrition right diet for busy people.

We hope that we by this letter have calmed you.

Yours sincerely
Nestlé UK


Scott Malkin
Public Relations Manager