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I was only twenty-one years old, when I travelled across the Atlantic with my girlfriend Alice on "The Ship of Dreams". When I boarded the Titanic in Southampton, I was deeply impressed; the ship exceeded all my expectations. I had many thoughts on the ship, as we were crossing the Atlantic with, but I was still quite overwhelmed. The Titanic was more like a floating hotel than a ship. It cost $7.5 million and it was unlike any other ship that had ever been built. Palm trees and other expensive plants decorated the luxurious hallways and corridors.
It was wonderful, completely as a city with streets and shops. We travelled on 1st class; it was nice all the places there were swimming pool, pitch, and a whole lot of cafes and restaurants. First class had big rooms. A first class ticket was a lot of money. First class people were very rich.
The first four days go fast there were so many things you could do.
Many of the passengers were sleeping when the Titanic struck the iceberg late on the evening of the 14. April 1912. I woke up when the ship hit the iceberg. I slept like a top, but was awakened when the ship gave some strange tremors throughout the ship. The sound disappeared in the same sudden way in which it started. A new ship on its maiden voyage, it can't be avoided, there are a few little things to be corrected I thought.
But an hour later I was awakened again, this time a Alice. She told me that there were starting to push water into the other end of the ship. And that I should get up on deck and took lifebelt on. I was worried when I came up on deck. The crowd was in shock and panic. I think my life want an end now. The people began frustrate and crying. People look for their family or friends. Nobody knows for certain what there should happen. The crew began took hold child's and their mothers, so they could came in to a lifeboat. There was an uncomfortable and scary feeling. All the lifeboats were filling up. I came in a lifeboat. It was cold. I was in the boat with forty other people. The people compete for their life. More and more people attempting to swim up to the lifeboats. The crews try to transmit the last emergency signal. The gravitation began to pull in the big chimneys. The forward chimney breaks down and smash many of the peoples there lie in the very cold water. Titanic travel oneself like a mountain out of the water and the lights went out. I sad in the lifeboat. It was a dreadful sight. Titanic break in the middle, the only part sink. After the first part was sinking, the second part drifted to the ocean floor. I could hear a cry of despair. In the freezing water there lie a lot of people. The squeal was vanished. There was a breathless silence. I hoped Alice was alive. It was terrible. I couldn't describe my feelings. I sad in a lifeboat. Nobody cry. I couldn't understand what was happen. We sad fossilize and stare vacantly into space. I couldn't dissemble me what i just now had life through. After a long and cold night in a lifeboat, came I to the ship Carpathian. It was a ship; there take surviving people, which had been on Titanic. I was fortunate, but I had survived. The boat sailed to American who people could take a plain home. It was a dreadful experience. So many peoples had lost one's life or their travelling companion. It is so bleak to look bag on the big disaster. And I think many times I was so fortunate to have my life still, and I command my life every day.
