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17. september 2004 - 12:03 Der er 7 kommentarer og
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engelsk stil

hey..

jeg fandt ud af idag, at jeg skal afl. engelsk stil her til kl 13:00...

og ja, har skrevet lidt.. men jeg syns sku det lyder lidt a lort.. kan i se nogen fejl i..? PLZ hurtig svar..



3. Mobile Mania


I can give the author right, in his bad statements, for an example, that teenager's

feels forgotten, if they don't get a minimum of approximately 100 sms a day.

But I disagree with the statement about working overtime for paying they’re call

cards, because in our age, you can make a top of the bill, because you can maximum

call for 400 Dkr. a month and then you’re mobile is closed to the end of the
month.

So I can get really mad because, in the end, there are more good statements than bad, for an example, if you are down town, and

your want to buy some vegetables, but don't know what exactly to buy, you

can call home to the food expert of the house (usually the mother), and get some help.   

or if you have been involved in an accident, you can use you're mobile phone

to call for help. 

In my own life I have some “good statement” experience. 

It's was a day where I was going to a football match, and there were coming many thousands

to that game, but because of bad luck, we lost, and there were some fights afterwards, and then

because of my phone, I could call for a taxi to pick us up, and get safely home.

Pupils can also just use the phone for fun, like I do, but it often ends with a few
hours a day, just with the phone.
Avatar billede Slettet bruger
17. september 2004 - 12:03 #1
det er om mobil telefoner.. så nu v i det
Avatar billede Slettet bruger
17. september 2004 - 12:10 #2
ja, okay.. ingen er online næsten.. :)
af. den sku bar nu så.. har selv lige lavet nogen ændringer..
Avatar billede xeniz Nybegynder
17. september 2004 - 12:12 #3
hm.. stadig lyst til at få den rettet ?
Avatar billede htmlkongen Novice
17. september 2004 - 12:15 #4
So I can get really mad because, in the end, there are more good statements than bad, for an example, if you are down town, and you want to buy some vegetables, but don't know what exactly to buy, you

can call home to the food expert of the house (usually the mother), and get some help.
HER skal hvert fald være nogle flere punktummer!
Avatar billede bufferzone Praktikant
17. september 2004 - 12:20 #5
I agree with the author, he statements, for an example, that teenager's

feels lost if they don't get a minimum of approximately 100 sms a day.

But I disagree with the statement about working overtime so they can afford the call

cards. In our age, you can make a top of the bill, because you can maximum forståe ikke hvad du vil sige

call for 400 Dkr. a month and then you’re mobile is closed to the end of the
month.

So I get really angry because, in the end, there are more good statements than bad, for an example, if you are down town, and

your want to buy some vegetables, but don't know what exactly to buy, you
det var lidt af det
Avatar billede xeniz Nybegynder
17. september 2004 - 12:22 #6
Der er mange vendinger i den stil jeg ville tage op til en ekstra overvejelse og skrive på en anden måde.
Avatar billede xeniz Nybegynder
17. september 2004 - 12:23 #7
nåmen han svarer ik så gider jeg ik til at sidde og rette i det
Avatar billede Slettet bruger
17. september 2004 - 14:27 #8
hey..

ja, ej jeg sku lii ha ventet 5 minutter mere..
jeg kørte efter jeg skrev det at jeg gik..
men tusind tak, for hjælpen ellers..
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