25 hurtige points

du må ikke bruge ekspertens point til at betale for services uden for eksperten og som ikke er tilgænlige for ekspertens brugere!
se pkt. 12 + 13 på http://www.eksperten.dk/regler.phtml

ihh...ok så tager jeg selv pointse ;-)

hvorimod hvis du viser os den tekst her på E som skal tjekkes og folk så giver dig svaret her på E - så er det jo efter reglerne :-)

check this out:::

American Record Industri drops the Idea of a Trial

The illegal music industri on the Internet is growing rapidly. Large websites offers private Internet users to download the most recently released music from theire website. By having thousands of users every day, the websites is earning huge sums.

The American record industri took court action against four American Internet offers, because they were gave acces, like all other Internet offers to eg. the pirate website www.listen4ever.com. The American record industri wanted to stop all Internet traffic around the website and to clarify if the internet offers had responsibility for the contents of what there was lying on their servers.

But before the record industri got to sue the illegal Chinese website, the page closed and disappeared from the Internet.
The opinion of the record association was that, now the website was gone there were no reason to lead a trial in opposition to www.listen4ever.com.
The record labels wanted to continue the trial in case www.listen4ever.com should open again.

Almost all over the world, the Internet offers has the common attitude that it is not them, who is responible for the data on the Internet. I would be an inspection completely out of proportions to examine the content of millions of webpages.
The responibility is on the webhosts and of course the owners of the websites.
If the webhosts do not do a vast job, inspecting their data for illegal music, there will continue to pop up pirate websites. And if someone discovers them – the will emediately shut down and open another place.

Jeg kan sige så meget at:

"the most recently released music from theire website." skal være
"the most recently released music from their website."

"American Internet offers, because they were gave acces" (dobbelt tralala) =
"American Internet offers, because they gave access"

record industri ? ville sige music business

"the page closed " = "the page was closed"

Du har en masse kongruens- og aktiv/passiv-fejl, især i sidste stykke.

Almost all over the world, the Internet offers has the common attitude that it is not them, who is responible for the data on the Internet. I would be an inspection completely out of proportions to examine the content of millions of webpages.
The responibility is on the webhosts and of course the owners of the websites.
If the webhosts do not do a vast job, inspecting their data for illegal music, there will continue to pop up pirate websites. And if someone discovers them – the will emediately shut down and open another place.

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Almost anywhere in the world, the Internet offers has the common attitude that it is not them ( HVAD ER MENINGEN MED DEN SÆTNING? ) who are responible for the data on the Internet ( bruger ordet 'Internet' som både subjekt og objekt - ikke godt ) . To examine the content of millions of webpages would be an inspection completely out of proportions.
The responsibility lies on the webhosts - and of course the owners of the websites.
If the webhosts do not do a vast ( vast bruges generelt om tællelige og fysiske størrelser - brug i stedet "tremendous" eller lignende ) job, inspecting their data for illegal music, pirate websites will continue to pop up. And if someone discovers them – the will immediately shut down and re-open in another place.