Engelsk stil 230 ord

Hej

Jeg står med min engelsk stil oversat fra dansk på 230 ord, er der nogen kan finde fejl(specielt udvidet tid og simpel tid) er det som er sværest for mig.

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Normandy
Diary, the month of June 1984

It was a strange feeling to visit the Arromanches today. Everything looked peaceful. First, we went for a walk along the beach to get an impression of the tide which falls and rises several meters twice a day. After lunch, we were sipping a drink at one of the many small restaurants that faced towards the beach. We were looking at the children who were playing on the beach and on an English tourist who tried to photograph a much lively family, while he was urging the youngest member of the family, who had the giggles to look reasonable sensibly.

But in the middle of these cozy holiday activities, we imagined how this beach looked forty years ago where an Englishman in Arromanches had completely other things to think about. Here on "Gold Beach" were 25.000 English soldiers put ashore, the sixth of June 1944, and the big grey concrete block, that the children are using as a bathing jetty, is a part of Port Winston, a great artificial harbor. When we were visiting the War Museum here in town, we saw a model of Port Winston. The long row of pontoon bridges was placed on a wave machine, that was constantly moving, so we got an impression of the ingenious construction, which withstood the violent storms, that was raging in the canal the month of June 1944.